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Outsider 5

Even though so, Pony can't take it take both his friends die in the same night. He kept thinking that Johnny was alife. When people said about Bob's incidence, Pony would only said that he was the one who killed him, not Johnny and Johnny was not died.


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Outsider 4

Seeing such unfortunate incident and it scared that Pony might ran to save Johnny despite his injury, Dally hit Pony's neck's hard as he could to make him 'sleep'. He wanted to save Johnny by himself. Three of them ended up in the hospital and Pony found out that his best friend, Johnny was dying. After a few days, Dally and Pony had recover.They went to see Johnny to tell him good news and yet Johnny only remembered to tell Pony to stay gold in a weak voice before he was died. Dally could not take it and he ran out of the room like hell. He then tried to release his anger by stealing nearby shop items, and get chase by the police. Pony knew what was what he want - die. After all that, Pony was sick for a few weeks due to his tiredness and injuries.

Outsider 3

Without the moment of thinking, Johnny pick up a knife and stab Bob. This happened so sudden, Bob was died. Bob's friends ran away after seeing all this. Pony who was almost drown didn't know this, only when he saw Bob's body under the street light. Johnny and Pony were fear to death. They went to find Dally and Dally sent them to somewhere far with a loaded gun and some money. Dally to them to hide in the church until he went to find them. Pony warned Dally not to tell this to Soda and Darry and they went straight to the church. In order not to let anyone recognise him, both of them cut this hair and Pony blench his. It was bored to their nerve. They ate and did the same things over and over again. Until the day Dally came who almost cant recognise them,three of them went to the nearby shop to buy some stuff. When they reached back to the church, they found out that the church was on fire. Pony and Johnny thought that it might be the cigarette that they had smoke in there cause the fire. When they heard that there will a few kids in the burning church, Pony along with Johnny ran into the church without a moment of heisted. Pony broke one of the window to get in the church. When he found that the kids. he passes the kids to the nearest adult outside of the window.After saving the kids, Pony went out of the church safely with the help of Dally. Johnny was not as lucky as him. Before Johnny went out of the church, he got caught into the fire and was badly injured.

The Outsiders 2

Johnny had once beaten badly by a bunch of soc ( rich boys ) and he remembered one of them was wearing a few rings. One night, Darry scolded Ponyboy because he went home late and they were worried abot him. Ponyboy talk back to him and they had a fight. Then Ponyboy ran out of the house to the lot nearby to find Johnny. The two young boys were all along outside in the midnight, without the gang there by their side and something bad had happened. As the boys was talking in the lot, suddenly came a car full of soc.One of the them was Bob and he was drunk. He said that Pony and Johnny had pick up their girls and wanted to pick up a fight. This happened a day before,that day Pony and Johnny went to see a movie. During the movie, Pony and Johnny became friends with Cherry and Marcia which both are soc. Because of something happen, they went to see sunrise. At there Bob and friends saw his chick with the greaser, he was angry and he brought them home immediately. Because of this, Bob thought they wanted his chick so he went to push Pony's head into the water at the fountain nearby cause him to be almost drown.

Book 1 - The Outsiders

He had a gang of friends. Inside the gang, he had two biological brothers. Both his brother love him, both his parents died in a car crash left the three of them. His big brother - Darry quit school in order to come out to work to support his younger brothers. His brother - Soda quit school because he has no talent in study. His name is Ponyboy. In his gang of friends, his best friend is Johnny. Everyone in the gang have a different background, the only common things are that they were poor and they have a group of true friends. Their neighborhood are living those poor ones while on the West side living those rich kids, who like to find for fights, always bully the poor. While this gang of friends always help each other to be out of their target.

To be continue...

O' Level

Until today then i know how carefree my sec 2 life was. June holiday wasnt like a holiday to me. Holiday is meant for people to work on those area that they not sure of and at the same time for them to relax. But well, not for me. This year is my O'level year. Every teacher started to give us one bunch of homework, everyday need to work out at least 2 to 3 homework or we will suffer when term reopen. For those people who like to do last minute work,they sure will get scolded by their teacher because that amount of homework wasnt 1 or 2 days can finish. But i know i will not do my homework until feel like dieing as i had always spend at least 1 hours for doing other things i like like playing computor games or watching television, to let myself relax. But of course not to relax too much. Well if you think this doesnt worth it, let me help you calculate. You just need to suffer for 5-6 month and you can happy ever after for next 70-80 years.